(02-18-2011 11:16 AM)FIUFan Wrote:  

(02-18-2011 09:12 AM)zeebart21 Wrote:  Sorry, it is what it is....
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Hey, no problem, I'd do the same things in some areas of Miami, esp. at a BK.

But to begin an entire self-righteous diatribe on a school and community with 'it's not easy being FIU' and 'I don't care for Miami' invites a rebuttal.

Why not put those negatives at the end, by putting them at the beginning it sets the tone for the entire aritcle. At the end you still get your point across but you don't taint the entire article with your bias right from the get-go.

But hey, I'm sure this 'professional' writer already knows this.